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| rider [registered] | 2010.06.08 - 11:28AM | Member | Respond |
| Wouldn't we ALL like to be the one to get inside Adam's head AND heart?! |
| Englishgirl [registered] | 2010.03.22 - 07:31AM | Member | Respond |
| For some reason this story entered my head the other day and vaguely remembering it was yours looked it up. Once found I had to reread it and looked at it with new eyes having now seen Four Rode Out I see Adam something like Marshal Ross knowing you liked that character as much as me I did wonder if it influenced you. Whatever the inspiration a wonderful piece that is worth many rereads. |
| sunshine [registered] | 2010.03.03 - 05:59PM | Member | Respond |
Very interesting story.
Author's Response: I never really know what that means, but I do appreciate the gift of your time, sunshine. :) |
| Ane Mavado [registered] | 2009.08.17 - 08:17PM | Member | Respond |
What a lovely study of Adam and his "lone ranger" tendencies. I always enjoy exploring the emotional bounds of the man in black. Thank you for your contribution.
Author's Response: I'm so glad I could contribut to such a worthy cause, Ane Mavado. My apologies for the late response to such a lovely review. Thank you very much. :) |
| sklamb [registered] | 2009.07.29 - 10:38PM | Member | Respond |
Thank you. It's definitely one future Adam might choose his way into--not a kind future, but one he would find some satisfaction in, I feel.
Author's Response: I agree with you, sklamb. Thanks so much for all your reviews! :) |
| patdavis [registered] | 2009.04.27 - 02:33PM | Member | Respond |
Whoa! There has to be MORE! Cant leave a person hanging
on that. Put that pen back in your hand and add thousands
of words more to this story. I wasnt through!
Author's Response: Aw, thank, Pat! You know what they say, it's better to leave while people love you than to overstay your welcome. But who knows... ;) |
| sandspur [registered] | 2009.03.09 - 09:22PM | Member | Respond |
I actually like the dark tone. It reminds me of one of the Sam Spade or Philip Marlowe characters in the 1930's-40's film noir. Adam would make a great Humphrey Bogart -- "of all the gin joints in all the towns in all the world, why did she have to walk into this one?" Great job JC!
Author's Response: You're so right, sandspur -- brooding Adam would have made a great film noir character. I like your reference to Bogie, because that's just what Marshal Cartwright was thinking! Many thanks for the gift of your time and the thoughtful review. :) |
| Concretehole [registered] | 2008.12.23 - 12:28AM | Member | Respond |
Wonderful story! Beautiful descriptions, great characterization, indepth and precise without being overblown! One of the best fics I have ever read in and out of the Bonanza forum. This is the first story I have commented on simply because when something fails to impress, I prefer to keep my mouth closed and save hurt feels, but I couldn't find a single fault in this story! (And trust me, I am a very picky reader!)
I hope you have more wonderful little one-shots like this tucked somewhere up your sleeve! :)
Author's Response: This one was written on a whim, and I have to say its reception has been a surprise. I'm always glad to hear from picky readers, being one myself. Thanks for your generous comments, Concretehole. I'd love to know how you got your moniker. :) |
| CindyW [registered] | 2008.04.24 - 07:35AM | Member | Respond |
Too short! You should continue this story - very intense!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Cindy! I've had a few requests from readers who want me to expand on it, but sometimes it's better to leave things to the imagination -- that way everyone can be happy. lol. :) |
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