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Bonanza World Fan Fiction Library
Reviews for Apron Strings
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| spudnut [registered] | 2010.09.07 - 10:51PM | Member | Respond |
GREAT story!! Enjoyed seeing Adam in a father's role. You captured his wry humor perfectly! Could feel Luke's stomach drop when he realized that the "gig" was up! : ) "Be sure your sins will find you out" came to mind! Thanks for this wonderful story!
Author's Response: You are very welcome spudnut, and thank you for such a wonderful review!!! I've never heard that saying before, but it definitely fits; where is it from? Thank you for the compliment on Adam! I try to get his sense of humour the best I can and am tickled you enjoyed the story so much! :) |
| idmarryhoss [registered] | 2010.08.05 - 03:57PM | Member | Respond |
I love the bunch of kids! Plus the euphemisms.
Author's Response: Yep, a story is never boring when you add a bunch of fiesty kids, eh? Thanks for your great review idmarryhoss! :) |
| idmarryhoss [registered] | 2010.08.05 - 03:41PM | Member | Respond |
Good to see the Cartwrights in a lively herd of children. What I would dream of too!
Author's Response: Dream indeed! LOL! Especially a certain scene (wink, wink), LOL! Thanks for another great review idmarryhoss! :) |
| elaine [registered] | 2010.08.05 - 09:19AM | Member | Respond |
Very funny, heart warming story. I love the "unpacking" excuse given to the children.
Author's Response: Thought readers might get a kick outta that part, LOL! Thanks so much elaine! So glad I could give you a bit of a chuckle! :) |
| ACrtwrghtQT [registered] | 2010.08.02 - 07:31AM | Member | Respond |
Another lovely glimpse of life in this Cartwright household, although I'm not so sure that Luke liked the outcome, ha ha! Loved the 'unpacking' idea too; I wonder how long it will take the older children to work out what is really going on? Lol. Please keep this family going, I love them. Thanks. ;)
Author's Response: Let's hope it takes a while before they figure it out, LOL! No,not the greatest outcome for poor Luke but I doubt this will hinder any mischief to come (hint, hint). Thank you sooooo much for such a fantastic review ACrtwrghtQT! And thank you for your continued interest in the series. Can't wait for you to read the next one and tell me what you think! Thanks again! You ROCK! :) |
| Jacks [registered] | 2010.07.31 - 04:20PM | Member | Respond |
Fun to read, love the family life of Adam.
Author's Response: Thanks sooo much Jacks! I'm quite partial to the Adam family life too, LOL! So glad you enjoyed the read! :) |
| nevadagal [registered] | 2010.07.31 - 12:56PM | Member | Respond |
nicely wriitten, Skarlett. I like Evelyn with Adam. They balance each other out.
nevadagal
Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment nevadagal! I think they balance each other out too, of course I am rather biased, LOL! :) |
| tylerboy [registered] | 2010.07.30 - 10:52PM | Member | Respond |
Very good story.
Author's Response: Thanks so much tylerboy! Glad you enjoyed it! :) |
| madabed32 [registered] | 2010.07.30 - 10:33PM | Member | Respond |
Great story, Skarlett...With all those kids running around, there's always a tale to be told...Love how each of your stories involved one child or another with has his/her own little mishaps...
I love reading your stories...about this brood...never a dull moment at their house...I am sooooo ready for the next chapter in this series...
Author's Response: You're right madabed, there are so many tales...I just need to get busy and get them out of my head, LOL! Thank you soooo much for such a thoughtful review and for your loyalty with the series. I can't wait to see what you think of the next one...mischief galore, LOL! Thanks again darlin', you ROCK! :) |
| lovemychico [registered] | 2010.07.30 - 04:39PM | Member | Respond |
Loved seeing the family welcoming Adam home the way they did, especially Evelyn :) :) :) Great Story
Author's Response: Yes, her welcome was very special (wink, wink), ROFL! Thanks for another great review lovemychico! So happy you decided to delve into the series! Your feedback has been making my ego swell, LOL! Thanks again Chickie! :) |
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