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| midnight [registered] | 2009.12.29 - 11:54AM | Member | Respond |
Beautiful story.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, midnight. Thank you for letting me know. :) |
| BensReader [registered] | 2009.09.06 - 06:08PM | Member | Respond |
What a great story, and with so much wonderful feeling. Your words have painted a very real picture of true love between these beautiful people.
Author's Response: What a lovely review -- thank you so much for compliments, BensReader. :) |
| Pam [registered] | 2009.02.04 - 09:41PM | Member | Respond |
What a lovely story, I truly enjoyed it.
Thank you,
Pam
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it, Pam. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) |
| Englishgirl [registered] | 2008.12.04 - 04:59AM | Member | Respond |
Lovely story that in a short glimpse captures Ben and Maries relationship. I particulaaly liked the description of brotherly love at the end. Thank you for sharing.
Author's Response: Thankyou for taking time to read and review, Englishgirl. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. :) |
| BensGirl [unregistered] | 2008.07.23 - 09:01PM | Reader | Respond |
Oh my gosh! I went weak in the knees reading this story. Good job describing how Marie felt from Ben's kisses!
Author's Response: Sorry I missed your review, Ben's girl! I'm really glad you liked the story. :) |
| jeantoal [registered] | 2008.06.18 - 12:21PM | Member | Respond |
A beautiful story I can almost feel the sexual tension.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it, jeantoal. Thanks for your review! :) |
| Pam [registered] | 2008.05.19 - 10:12PM | Member | Respond |
What a warm and loving story. Excellent!
Pam
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Pam! Glad you enjoyed it. :) |
| Prima donna [registered] | 2007.07.18 - 06:56PM | Member | Respond |
Nice story with the Cartwright clan.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this one, PD. Thanks for reading! :) |
| debbie_marie [registered] | 2007.04.06 - 07:06PM | Member | Respond |
This was so good. Ben Cartwright, Marie and the 3 boys. They sound like a happy family. Ben and Marie sound like they are so much in love. Great story.
Author's Response: Thanks DM. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. :) |
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