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bubba [registered]2010.09.06 - 09:16AM | Member | Respond
Lovely.

catlover0908 [registered]2010.04.29 - 08:22AM | Member | Respond
So breathtakingly beautiful!!! I only wish I was Marie in this story LOL

catlover0908 [registered]2010.04.29 - 08:22AM | Member | Respond
So breathtakingly beautiful!!! I only wish I was Marie in this story LOL

midnight [registered]2009.12.29 - 11:54AM | Member | Respond
Beautiful story.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, midnight. Thank you for letting me know. :)

BensReader [registered]2009.09.06 - 06:08PM | Member | Respond
What a great story, and with so much wonderful feeling. Your words have painted a very real picture of true love between these beautiful people.

Author's Response: What a lovely review -- thank you so much for compliments, BensReader. :)

maria [registered]2009.02.09 - 05:58AM | Member | Respond
nice

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, Maria. :)

Pam [registered]2009.02.04 - 09:41PM | Member | Respond
What a lovely story, I truly enjoyed it. Thank you, Pam

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it, Pam. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

Englishgirl [registered]2008.12.04 - 04:59AM | Member | Respond
Lovely story that in a short glimpse captures Ben and Maries relationship. I particulaaly liked the description of brotherly love at the end. Thank you for sharing.

Author's Response: Thankyou for taking time to read and review, Englishgirl. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. :)

BensGirl [unregistered]2008.07.23 - 09:01PM | Reader | Respond
Oh my gosh! I went weak in the knees reading this story. Good job describing how Marie felt from Ben's kisses!

Author's Response: Sorry I missed your review, Ben's girl! I'm really glad you liked the story. :)

jeantoal [registered]2008.06.18 - 12:21PM | Member | Respond
A beautiful story I can almost feel the sexual tension.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it, jeantoal. Thanks for your review! :)

Pam [registered]2008.05.19 - 10:12PM | Member | Respond
What a warm and loving story. Excellent! Pam

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Pam! Glad you enjoyed it. :)

Prima donna [registered]2007.07.18 - 06:56PM | Member | Respond
Nice story with the Cartwright clan.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this one, PD. Thanks for reading! :)

debbie_marie [registered]2007.04.06 - 07:06PM | Member | Respond
This was so good. Ben Cartwright, Marie and the 3 boys. They sound like a happy family. Ben and Marie sound like they are so much in love. Great story.

Author's Response: Thanks DM. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. :)

bjonesgar [registered]2007.03.23 - 09:45PM | Member | Respond
Great scenes!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed them, bjonesgar. :)

Prima donna [registered]2007.02.27 - 06:12PM | Member | Respond
What a nice story.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, PD. :)

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